letting go …
scratching
at wounds
picking
scabs
unleashing pain
twisting knives
turning effortlessly
amid the cacophonous romp
of highfives …
letting go
of
scraped souls
eroded
by
dishevelled dignity
stung
wrung
strung
and
hung
to dispel quaint smiles
perfected over a million wounded miles
shattering consciensces
along the way
blinding
blinkering
rose-tinted phantasy
day to groteque day
clogging vision
hazing eyes
tugging
pulling
tearing
down
curtains
leaving eyes
blinded
blinkered
unseeing
unfeeling …
while broken stems
mend gently
elsewhere
plucked
along strings
strings
strung
and
strummed
igniting
numbed senses
sublime flavours
on clouds of
touch
taste
melding
fusing
myriad dreams
into
dreadlocked hopes
entwined
intertwined
knowing the paths ahead
to be
far from kind
still
setting forth
yet
moving
ever moving
forward onward
hearts ablaze
hopeful
letting go
of it all
leaving it all
far far behind …
Thank you for describing Pain so beautifully Afzal😢. Is their any verse you can write upon on beginning of unknown journey.If it is do share.
Thanks in advance
Peace and Love always pal ✌
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Beautiful my friend. Letting go is the hardest part of love and if honest, it never really dies. Its tendrils remain bonded by memory. ❤
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thank you, my dear friend and yes the feelings so deeply embedded never do die. they are carried by us – even if in the deepest recesses of our beings.
thank you again, Léa, for sharing your thoughts and please accept my warmest wishes to you and to all those dear to you.
peace and hope and justice and freedom and dignity and gender-rights and lgbti-rights for ALL
☮✊👍✌
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You have been missed my friend. Let us hope that the repairs to the internet lines will allow us to remain online. 🤞🤞👍✌🤞
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that is the hope my dear friend – may the channels of communication remain open
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Mais oui mon ami!
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😊✌
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✌😊✌👍
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Fabulous poetry on a difficult topic. Wish we never knew what that felt like but thankful we can learn to let go.
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thank you for your very kind sentiments.
indeed a difficult topic. and yes hopefully we can let go – however long it may take though
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warmest wishes to you and to all those dear to you
peace ✌ always
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Letting go is often a very painful thing even if persons or experiences that no longer serve you have to be severed; the process can be soul splitting and jarring…
However the sun does eventually shine again
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deep and insightful and makes me cringe at the “experiences or persons that no longer serve you” – hard and painful indeed.
thank you very much for these very profound and thought provoking words.
warmest wishes to you and all those who are dear to you.
peace ✌
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Beautiful!
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thank you very much, Jason.
much appreciated.
my warmest of wishes to you and to those who are dear to you.
peace brother ✌☮👍✊
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Thanks!
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all thanks to you
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