the rapids of life smashed me against the jagged rocks of fate and time,
I tried my best to cope with the day-to-dayness of a society mired in cruel slime,
I tried, I cried,
I felt so cold I thought that I may have died.
Shattered shards of glass littered my path ahead,
I faked smiles though within I was dead.
The promises of joy seemed a mirage untrue,
which is when I found solace when I met you.
You shush my hearts cries,
you take me on your unfettered wings, soaring across the bluest skies,
your love is simple, tender, shielding me from the unbearable crowd,
your love is a balm, soothing me with gentle light, banishing every dark cloud.
This is why you are my world, a universe in my heartbeat,
a love so pristine, so warm, holding onto me so I may never retreat,
to that frigid void, that unfeeling vacuum that shrouded me,
before you took my hand in yours,
before you became the eyes through which I see …
Penned so beautifully π
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my humble thanks and deep appreciation for your warm and kind and generous words.
warmest wishes to you and to all those dear to you.
Peace and Hope and Equality and Gender-rights and Justice and Freedom and Dignity for All ββ
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I’m completely agree with you Pal, all those nourishes our soul at first. π
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and I agree with you, my friend β
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Beautiful poem.
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thank you very much indeed friend. Peace β
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Beautiful π
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many thanks friend … appreciated much. Peace β
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thank you very much indeed
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Subhanallah!
BTW…main bhai toh Gujju hoon (sorry to intrude, but…)
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kya baat … we are everywhere LOL
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Oh man, I can vouch for that! My ears catch our raucous cacophony & nose the Khakra chhunda wherever I go!
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haha … classic man!
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and no intrusion at all my brother β
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This is so so beautiful, my dear friend.
“Before you became the eyes through which I see me”..damn I wish I had written that.
Lots of love to you
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thanks yaar mere dost! thank you so very much for your always inspiring words … lots of love from gujju to you … peace β
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Aw I miss Gujju. Give him my love, ok?
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will do so most promptly π
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And what was name you had given me?
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yikes … jnuwaali
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Hahaha. Chal jhootha
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hahaha … jhootha gujju
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Chal maaf kar diya
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phew … what a relief
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