hope resists …
pain surrounds, closes in,
encircles raw wounds,
picks at scabs,
freshly coagulated,
while stubborn, impertinent, brash, young, ancient hope,
persists,
resists,
as it has,
and
as it shall …
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hope resists …
pain surrounds, closes in,
encircles raw wounds,
picks at scabs,
freshly coagulated,
while stubborn, impertinent, brash, young, ancient hope,
persists,
resists,
as it has,
and
as it shall …
The Manic Scribbler
I like your theme of HOPE and how “young, ancient hope resists, persists”. Yes!
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Hope without effort = going nowhere fast.
Or to put it another way:
Something + nothing = standing still
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I really like this one. Great poem
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