cinnamon clouds, shrouds,
cardamom skies, as moist eyes,
shed tears along this cobblestone pathway, where vanilla dreams lay,
strewn, broken, wounded by harsh words spoken,
leading me to this day,
today …
cinnamon clouds, shrouds,
cardamom skies, as moist eyes,
shed tears along this cobblestone pathway, where vanilla dreams lay,
strewn, broken, wounded by harsh words spoken,
leading me to this day,
today …
This was gorgeous.
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thank you brother
Peace ✌
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Your work is always of a good standard. Have you checked my other blog out?
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not yet brother. will do so. please send me a link
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Here it is, be sure to comment. https://bunsareallthatyourequire.wordpress.com
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thanks brother…will do
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I look forward to it.
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looks good already 😁
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Remember to leave feedback, I appreciate your opinions.
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will most certainly do, brother
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You’re a cool blogging brother.
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thanks, bro … as are you … 👍
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That’s nice of you to say.
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✌
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I hope you enjoy what you read.
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I am sure I shall, brother. thanks again for the link 👍
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Anytime, I just posted something new there.
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great stuff brother. shall visit and am pretty sure shall enjoy your words
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Thanks pal.
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anytime, bro
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Cheers dude.
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✌👍
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Hope my new site is not too hot for you.
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lol … hot always welcome 😀
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I totally agree.
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✌👍
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Afzal, where do I begin, how do I begin! Such fabulous poetry: cinnamon clouds and cardamom skies, shedding tears along the cobblestone, leading you to where you are today…Such pathos in a spicy twist. And guess what, I love the rhyme scheme.
It’s a gem!
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Thank you so very much, as always, my more than generous friends! really, thank YOU!
Warmest wishes to you and your significant other
Peace ✌
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You are most welcome. You are a great poet and the biggest quality about your poetry is its simplicity. Such beauty in brevity, always!
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truly, I am humbled. thank you so so much for your always kind which inspire me to keep on a-scribblin’
Peace ✌
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