Us men,
almost always,
men,
myopic, impotent men,
our manliness oozing, seeping,
dripping,
soaking,
in swathes of red,
scarlet blood on infant skin,
hardened,
caked,
dried on cold, dead flesh.
Who am i,
a man,
myopic, impotent,
my swagger puffed on conceit,
my country right or wrong,
my god not yours,
my culture your caste,
tribe, sect, ideology … … …
Who am i ?
a man ?
knitted into,
shared humanity ?
Perhaps ’tis time,
to let this rotten, festering,
glossy, botoxed, tucked, trimmed, diseased skin,
moult,
laying stark this sham,
this theatre,
these lies, the maggots burrowing deep,
into man,
chiselling, smashing,
beheading, hanging,
shooting, bombing, drone-ing, killing, raping, torturing, killing, killing, killing,
excising man,
ripping man out of humanity.
Yes,
i am man.
Wow! Powerful piece!
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Dhanyavaad dost-e-man
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Interesting write…huMANity in unregenerate fallen state is violent, bloody and impotent to help himself.
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✌ peace my friend and thank you
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Thank you very much friend
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Impactful, raw truth. This is only one side of man. We women need to help men foster the peaceful, conscious warrior…prophet, explorer, healer, builder, protector. If you can write this, then you are carrying the positive side well. More power to you my brother!
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thank you very much, my sister … all strength to you and wishing you peace ✌
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Powerful statement on the position of our mainly patriacal world..
It takes a true Man to stand up to the shortcomings of his gender with clear intention making amends…
Keep writing… Bravo!
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humbled. thank you
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