as she lies bleeding,
the girl who skipped, hopped to school,
all of nine and a half years old,
with ribbons in her hair and a laugh that was her father’s pride.
as she lies bleeding,
shrapnel lodged in her torn stomach,
she stares at her skipping rope,
as her blood soaks it the colour of cherries her mummy buys.
as she lies bleeding,
she sees people all around thick black smoke,
blurred visions of scattering feet, shoes left behind,
hearing nothing but the pinging in her smashed eardrums.
as she lies bleeding,
she slips away and then she is dead,
a mangled heap of a nine and a half year old girl,
whose laugh was her father’s pride.
as she lies bleeding,
for even in death she bleeds some more,
shrapnel wedged in her torn stomach,
stealing the light from her bright little eyes.
as she lies bleeding …
in jallianwala bagh in ‘19,
leningrad in ‘42,
freetown in ‘98,
soweto in ‘76,
jenin in ‘02,
hanoi in ‘68,
beirut in ‘85,
raqqa now,
aleppo still,
gaza too.
as she lies bleeding,
a little nine and a half year old girl,
whose laugh was her parent’s pride,
we know she’ll bleed more,
tomorrow and in many tomorrows yet unborn,
with shrapnel in her stomach,
ripped open and torn.
as she lies bleeding … …
Beautiful!!
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Thank you very much
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A powerful and disturbing piece…an ache for peace. Unfortunately, terrorists lack reason and human sympathy.
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Too true my friend
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I found your heart-wrenching words on Roberta Pimentel’s blog and in reading the full poem, I am even more touched by the reading of the added dates of wars both present and past with the shadow of future wars to come, sobering thoughts amongst the powerful image of one dying girl.
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thank you! this poem holds a special place. If only, as Pete Seeger sang ‘we’d say goodbye to war’, the obscenity we are witnessing live on HD tvs would not be so repugnant and seemingly futile. the dates and naming places depressed me because it all seemed like an unending cycle or loop rather, and were that be true there would be no more hope – the essence of our shared humanity
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I was at my local Farmer’s Market this morning with my Mom, as I was approaching her at her favourite stall, I noticed a young woman comforting a young man who was openly crying, they were sitting on a curb. Your poem reminded me that kindness has to start where I am now and I offered them something that I have never done with a stranger before, I asked them if they needed a hug. They said they were fine, even though the young man was still shedding tears. No one else seemed to notice, my Mom did and she also asked if they were O.K. They were not willing to share their sorrow but I’m glad I stepped into that sacred place, “the essence of our shared humanity” and am better for having done so. This is why we write and blog, thank you again for your words.
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‘this is why we write and blog’ – your words and what you have shared is something I hope to cherish and carry with me – thank YOU, my friend for sharing your humanity. Really. Thank you
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Right now I’m thinking of John Lennon’s song, “Imagine”, thank you for your very kind words.
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Beautiful song – thank YOU
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No words…touched deep inside and I’m crying! Kudos to you to write so beautifully the pain!!
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humbled that it touched you, and thank you, dear friend ✌
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So beautifully written for such a difficult topic
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thank you very much, friend. much appreciated.
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Reblogged this on Roberta Pimentel.
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Thank you very much, friend
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You are welcome!
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Powerful …..!!! bravo
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Thank you, dear Seren
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Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Thank YOU, dear friend
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You are welcome!
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This is so heart writhing and of course beautifully written!
Almost made me cry. 😥
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I felt the same while writing this scribble, my friend … it is hope eternal that this world may put an end to war
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Right. But it only seems far fetched to imagine a world without wars. There is always going to be someone who derives profit/pleasure out of someone else’s misery. 😦
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it does seem far-fetched, yes and as you so correctly say in this world of profit over people it does seem like a sort of utopian view. BUT we live with hope and we raise our voices whenever and wherever we see or face the evils of empire and of fanaticism. Thank you as always, my friend for your comments – they always make one think twice and reflect deeply. Warmest wishes to you, Iflah ✊👍✌
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I really hope that those who are living under a constant fear of the next bomb dropping on their homes, find enough hope to live through dark days.
And it’s my pleasure to read and learn from your work, so thanks to you. 🙂
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all thanks to you and like-minded humane souls – there is hope always – and as someone once said that is a good thing and no good ever dies (from ‘The Shawshank Redemption’
Peace to you, my dear friend, and warmest wishes from the South Africa ✌
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Right! I remember that movie!
🙂
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oh..heart wrenching..
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✊ if only those in the corridors of power stop the killing, in the name of humanity and the fanatics stop the savagery, we may then call ourselves ‘human’ again ✊
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Thank you, my friend Ashu for your comment
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